How do you like my lyrics? Please give your opinion.?

Just remember under her mascara


and her red fingernails


and fake hair extensions


She'll never be like me at all...


you could try, but never succeed.





You think you have it all


But you really have nothing at all.





Chorus: Just remember when your slow dancing with her


She's not me


Just remember when you go to kiss her


She's not me


You found the best you could have but you let it go


So just in case your wondering what your missing


You lost me





She likes to gossip and brag


and thinks of nothing else except a Gucci bag


She thinks she's so mature but she's very child like


she loves to be the center in the spotlight





So tonight when your dancing with her


and you're trying to grind on her


A feeling of loss and sensation will come over your temptation


cause you know...


She's nothing like me and will never be


You'll have less fun without meHow do you like my lyrics? Please give your opinion.?
:| I don't like the beginning, maybe I would have to hear someone sing it to like it. I think it's the fake hair extensions part that doesn't sound good.


But I like the rest, ';She likes to gossip and brag and think of nothing esle except a Gucci bag'; LOL


Gosh, I sound like Simon from American Idol!


Good luck and keep up the good work!How do you like my lyrics? Please give your opinion.?
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Bah





BTW, you've got to improve your ortography.